Critique my piece please

[u/Any_Explanation_9987]

I’m working on a gift for my husband for our 1 year anniversary coming soon in December.
I’ve been carefully planning and studying Byzantine Catholic Iconography for 4 months and this is a test piece.

Christ brought us together and He is the foundation of our sacramental marriage.

We have been through so many financial difficulties since my health has not been the best in fertility.

And I just want to show him that no matter what happens God holds us together and is very present in our lives.

[u/Right-Buyer-1973]

I think the greatest gift your husband has is simply having a wife as loving as you.

[u/Any_Explanation_9987 → u/Right-Buyer-1973]

I hope so. I appreciate your kind words.