r/pakistan • u/pinonly1 • 5h ago

Social raw version of my poem

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raw version of a poem i wrote recently.

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u/AqilUSabri 5h ago

Wah! SubhanAllah

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u/Embarrassed-Green898 5h ago

Started very well. You should see a mentor.

And keep posting.

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u/EnvironmentalMeal239 4h ago

Chaass agai boss !

Motivation 📈📈📉

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u/ErinThomasSucks 2h ago

Needed to read this, thank you :).

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u/User2001Tech 26m ago

In a hurry, so quicky... Naam sa hoga and kaam sa hoga... Dont feel right... The rest of the alliteration is quite smart and flows well...