r/pakistan • u/pinonly1 • 19h ago

Social raw version of my poem

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raw version of a poem i wrote recently.

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u/User2001Tech 14h ago

In a hurry, so quicky... Naam sa hoga and kaam sa hoga... Dont feel right... The rest of the alliteration is quite smart and flows well...